The horrors of smoking
Quite possibly the most widely recognized issues today that are killing individuals, everywhere on the world, is smoking. Numerous individuals start this habit due to stress, peer pressure and curiosity. One cigarette can bring about smoking others, which can prompt significant fixation. At the point when somebody smokes a cigarette they are not only harming themselves, but others around them. Smoking does terrible things to the human body that a great many people don't know about. Smoking causes cancer, heart disease, and many other dysfunctions that can leave a person severely ill or dead. Research has shown that smoking can shorten you life by 10 years. Anyway, why do individuals continue to smoke? The appropriate response is clearly, dependence. Smoking is a hard propensity to break since tobacco contains nicotine, which is exceptionally addictive. An individual can get cancer in their respiratory system without placing a cigarette in th...
Good ideas. Thumbnail number 2 seems not so clear, maybe have different words to show that one side is what your lung should look like and the other is what you lung looks like durning and after smoking. The third thumbnail seems to have a lot of blank space especially on the top. They all look good so far!
ReplyDeleteAlso the first thumbnail is creative and has smart spacing. After the word effects add a colon and it flows really nice
DeleteThe first thumbnail is really good as it fills up the page and is straight to the point. You also identified everything well too. The second thumbnail is off to a good start. Maybe put the "do better" heading in either the top or bottom and craft a new subheading or heading in another area to fill up space? Maybe defining the lungs that are being displayed in the flyer would be a good move (Smoker vs. Non-Smoker). The third one is very creative and offers good resources for people to quit. However, there is a bit of space that you could definitely fill up pretty easily. Good work!
ReplyDeletethese thumbnails are under-developed, and your group members are making note of this, but they need to constructively give you feeback more than they are. Where is the body copy / hashtag placement? The placement of the organization? Contact info? Where are the Pantone colors assigned to? Please re-do the thumbnails so they make visual sense. The ideas, from what you have so far, are off to a decent start - please follow the criteria we use to create and thoughtfully communicate thumbnails.
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