ALL GOOD THINGS COME TO AN END.
Resume Project This resume is one that will catch an employer's eye. Starting off with "Briana Bautista" in bold lettering emphasizes who the employer is speaking to. While the positioning of the contact information implies Briana Bautista has a LinkedIn for the employer to check out prior work she has done in the past. Flyer Project Smoking isn't a good habit to pick up on. This flyer is blunt and gets to the point. The red lettering stands out, so "QUIT" is the first message that's delivered. The red, black, and white colors share a sense of seriousness with the message being displayed. Brochure Project Disney's: Animal Kingdom is a portion of the huge theme park, so a map is necessary for visitors to have handy. The images help visitors locate their dining halls or show activities. Visitors will also get an opportunity to participate in a coaster challenge for a chance to win a prize! Logo Project This logo is an addition to the company named ...
Good ideas. Thumbnail number 2 seems not so clear, maybe have different words to show that one side is what your lung should look like and the other is what you lung looks like durning and after smoking. The third thumbnail seems to have a lot of blank space especially on the top. They all look good so far!
ReplyDeleteAlso the first thumbnail is creative and has smart spacing. After the word effects add a colon and it flows really nice
DeleteThe first thumbnail is really good as it fills up the page and is straight to the point. You also identified everything well too. The second thumbnail is off to a good start. Maybe put the "do better" heading in either the top or bottom and craft a new subheading or heading in another area to fill up space? Maybe defining the lungs that are being displayed in the flyer would be a good move (Smoker vs. Non-Smoker). The third one is very creative and offers good resources for people to quit. However, there is a bit of space that you could definitely fill up pretty easily. Good work!
ReplyDeletethese thumbnails are under-developed, and your group members are making note of this, but they need to constructively give you feeback more than they are. Where is the body copy / hashtag placement? The placement of the organization? Contact info? Where are the Pantone colors assigned to? Please re-do the thumbnails so they make visual sense. The ideas, from what you have so far, are off to a decent start - please follow the criteria we use to create and thoughtfully communicate thumbnails.
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